Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Welcome to the monthly post for The Insecure Writer’s Support Group (IWSG). We’re a group of writers who linger too near our keyboards all of the time but especially the first Wednesday of the month. Join us. My awesome co-hosts for the May 6 posting of the IWSG are Jenni Enzor, Jemima Pett, Jamie of Uniquely Maladjusted but Fun!

The optional question this month is: What was the most inspiring feedback you received from readers, including agents, editors, and beta readers?

The absolute best feedback I’ve ever received was from a beta read of my current book. Handwritten in the pages of my climax was the word BITCH (she meant me), and a page or two later when the outcome of the scene was clear, the same reader had a sad face and the word heartbroken scrawled in large text. The scene had 100% done it’s job. Now, time for some news.

Chonkers is my news tidbit this month. I heart Chonkers.

https://apnews.com/article/chonkers-giant-sea-lion-san-francisco-pier-b265382b50fbb07a0debb0db8b25d4b5

In science news, quantum position verification is destined for a high-tech facility near you. I continue to be amazed by quantum mechanics and now it shows that you can know if “the call is coming from inside the house.” Did I just date myself?

https://www.sciencenews.org/article/quantum-physics-location-security

I leave you with a song. Enjoy and I’ll see you next month.

https://youtu.be/fKopy74weus?si=DcGzNK0QY1VInxUT

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About kimlajevardi

I am a forty-something-year-old writer. I'm currently drafting my second book. I've also written short stories, poems, and some non-fiction over the last several years. My interest in writing formed during countless hours with my nose tucked in books. I’m represented by Kristina Sutton Lennon at Focused Artists.
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28 Responses to Insecure Writer’s Support Group

  1. Beth Camp's avatar Beth Camp says:

    What an unexpected reader feedback! And perfect for the story she/he read! You made me smile . . . thank you for co-hosting this wonderful online writing community that gives back to much to all of us.

  2. natalieiaguirre's avatar natalieiaguirre says:

    Thanks for co-hosting. I’m glad that the feedback was right on.

  3. mlouisebarbourfundyblue's avatar mlouisebarbourfundyblue says:

    Hi, Kim! Thanks for co-hosting this month! I enjoyed each of your links. Loved Chonkers! Loved your feedback!

  4. Toi Thomas's avatar Toi Thomas says:

    Thanks for co-hosting this month. I love the feedback you received-so visceral.

    • kimlajevardi's avatar kimlajevardi says:

      Visceral is the perfect description, and it’s why I loved it so much. No one can have a visceral reaction unless they’re engaged in the scene. Engaged readers are gold.

  5. Well, Kim, you got a reaction to your writing. This is what is important. This means the reader was engaged with your story. Bravo! Thanks for cohosting this month at IWSG!

  6. Sorry ! Anonymous on seals and sealions pressed send too soon.

  7. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Great reads – both your beta reader, and the amazing sealion.

    Not terrific sealions, but wild Atlantic greys and the much rarer common seals are why we head for the seal nurseries of Scotland’s east coast every November.

    Air breathing mammals,. as the wildlife posters explain, which is why they come onto the beaches to give birth.

  8. spunkonastick's avatar spunkonastick says:

    That is one big sea lion! I miss seeing them.

  9. yvettecarol's avatar yvettecarol says:

    Whoa! You did well not taking offence at that! I remember when one of my beta readers messaged me to say she was really annoyed that I had included a much younger character with the older kids, because the younger one ‘was just nothing but trouble, and she shouldn’t even be in the group!’ She was so incensed over this character, and that gave me great joy because I had gained such an intense reaction 🙂

  10. Lidy's avatar Lidy says:

    Thanks for co-hosting today! And LOL, her cursing at you was the best feedback she could give. Straight to the point.

  11. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Chonkers is adorable! And it sounds like your beta reader was very engaged with your characters.

  12. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Thank you for the Chonkers. We all need more of that in our life. And thanks for co-hosting today! Happy IWSG day.

  13. Those are some wild comments! I need to go back to those from my third book as they were encouraging and hilarious.

    Thanks for co-hosting!

  14. Olga Godim's avatar Olga Godim says:

    Love the sea lion clip. So life-affirming in the sea of negative news today. Thanks for sharing.

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